[Andrew, prematurely, but I can't help it.]
Sorry, Senator Clinton, this won't work. You sound desperate and whiny. And the mailer isn't that bad, for Pete's sake. The word "boon" should not have been in quote marks. But the rest is fine. The YouTube commenters capture the mood. She's losing it:
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