Here's Walt Whitman's alternative to Hitch's revision - a more positive version of commandments and more than ten, and all about what we should do rather than what we shouldn't.
God I love that man and all the America he represents:
This article available online at:
http://www.theatlantic.com/daily-dish/archive/2010/03/revising-the-ten-commandments-ctd/189351/
